Sanj's Feedback

Alex Rhodes:

Will Jones:

Krish Chauhan:

Angus Simmons:

Brad Ryan:

Millie Leader:

Molly Simpson:

Ollie Dennis:

Nat's Feedback

Will Jones 

Alex Rhodes 

Angus Simmons

Brad Ryan

Jack Green 

Chloe Phillips

Krishna Chauhan 

Michelle Knight

Millie Leader

Molly Simpson 

Nat's Digipak Feedback

It became clear to us both that our digipaks needed a rethink and restyle. This is because the photo we are using for a start ant in enough quality, as well as the whole staging of the photo. This means that we need to book the school camera to have a photoshoot this week with our artist to produce better photos. Also, the regular conventions of a pop digipak haven't been met by both Sanj and I with regards to layout. This means that we would both like to do some more research into layout styles to help us improve our drafts.

25 Word Pitch

 Our first attempt at the 25 word pitch:



  

                   





 This is our second and final attempt at our 25 word pitch.